Ghosts of the Ancients – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

Patricia of High Five and Raspberries presents “Stonehenge”:

ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground
guardians advance their cause
deterring lurid darkness

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month Nov 2013
(by Patricia)

Tan Renga Month #14:
ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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8 Responses to Ghosts of the Ancients – TRM

  1. Sun says:

    having guardians always a blessing. ☺

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  2. Nice completion Becca … guardian angels enlighten your path …

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  3. Nice to be guarded… dark it is here for sure…

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  4. Gillena Cox says:

    good feeling about this

    much love…

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  5. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Whoa! I have never read of darkness being lurid before!

    Ghosts of the Ancients

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  6. kaykuala says:

    Guardian angels are there for the asking. How true! Nicely becca!

    Hank

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  7. Steph says:

    Spooky. Lurid darkness.. conjures quite the image!

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  8. WabiSabi says:

    Comforting to know that the guardians can deter the darkness! 🙂

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