O Sweet October – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

Opie Houston presents:

oh, sweet October …
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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oh, sweet October …
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine
spirits and tongues replenished
once snowflakes hath melted

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013

(by Opie Houston)

Tan Renga Month #26:
oh, sweet October …
spare thy frost on yonder grapes
our sweet summer wine

[ … ] your stanza ??????