Rustling Leaves Dancing – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

Kaykuala presents “rustling leaves dancing“:


Rustling leaves dancing
Light breeze brushing rosy cheeks
Young hearts aflutter

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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Rustling leaves dancing
Light breeze brushing rosy cheeks
Young hearts aflutter
Fluid foxtrot with the wind
Duo laud their fifty years

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month Nov 2013
(by Kaykuala)

Tan Renga Month #27:
Rustling leaves dancing
Light breeze brushing rosy cheeks
Young hearts aflutter

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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9 Responses to Rustling Leaves Dancing – TRM

  1. Your words dance with me…

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  2. Sun says:

    i love the sweet tone you took us on. very nice and after 50 years, they deserve an award ☺

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  3. jrbsays says:

    Fox trot in the woods…yes!

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  4. nice..that ‘hearts aflutter” has us all in the romantic mood 🙂

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  5. That’s a nice long anniversary … and you’ve caught it so well in this con tinuation of the Tan Renga

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  6. I like your fluid foxtrot.

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  7. Some duo 50 years Wonderful completion – so creative -carol,xxx
    Thank for visiting ^_^

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  8. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Thank you for your celebration of long-lived relationships!

    Rustling Leaves

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