The Moon is Rising – Tan Renga

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #21:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

the moon is rising
the silvery waves resonate
in tune with my heart

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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the moon is rising
the silvery waves resonate
in tune with my heart
nature in harmony
lullabies whisper promise

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LOGO - TAN RENGA CHALLENGE new
(by Haiku writer – Chèvrefeuille)

Prompt #21:
the moon is rising
the silvery waves resonate
in tune with my heart

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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3 Responses to The Moon is Rising – Tan Renga

  1. Sun says:

    whenever i hear the word lullabies it makes me think pretty. pretty nice completion.

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  2. Kitties Blue says:

    Mom says that she was unfamiliar with this format, but she really likes it, as well as what you created. Purrs and hugs, Lily Olivia, Mauricio, Misty May, Giulietta, Fiona, Astrid, Lisbeth and Calista Jo

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  3. promise in lullabies … that sounds soo nice.

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