Summer Evening – Tan Renga

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #26:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

summer evening
a breeze turns leaves over
abandoned book

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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summer evening
a breeze turns leaves over
abandoned book
lovers relish moonlit walks
book remains unfinished

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LOGO - TAN RENGA CHALLENGE new
(by Haiku writer – Nicole the Local Artist)

Prompt #26:
summer evening
a breeze turns leaves over
abandoned book

[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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4 Responses to Summer Evening – Tan Renga

  1. atrm61 says:

    Wow Becca-this is awesome!

    Like

  2. Very nicely written continuation of this Tan Renga Becca … very strong and very romantic … thank you for sharing and your kind comment.

    Like

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