Wallflower’s First

Wallflowers first

Wallflower’s first dance
She pirouettes until dawn
Ballet slippers fly

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© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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12 Responses to Wallflower’s First

  1. cheryl says:

    Luved this Becca, it’s full of youth and emotion


  2. reminds me of Cinderella somehow …! vividly painted !


  3. Brenda says:

    My heart leaps with those ballet slippers. Truly magical.


  4. WabiSabi says:

    Memories of my ‘first’ dance came back to me! Thank you!


  5. reshmaharish says:

    Your words created images of a fairytale..It is liberating to let go of one’s inhibitions.


  6. Expressed well in few words.


  7. Rallentanda says:

    Wallflowers have their turn. Good one.!


  8. Alice Keys says:

    I liked the way you brought the wallflower’s dance to life with only a few words. Cleanly written. 🙂


  9. oneofaclass says:

    Here’s a lovely story told in few syllables! Thanks for sharing and finding Haiku Horizons!


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