Daffodils Open – Tan Renga

 Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #30:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven
dappled faces beam with joy
cardinals flutter in song

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Tan Renga Prompt #30:
daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven

[ … ] your stanza ??????