Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #30: write a Tan Renga.
Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7). Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two. Poet One writes the 5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.
daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven
[ … ] your stanza ??????
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daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven
dappled faces beam with joy
cardinals flutter in song
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014
(by Haiku writer – JulesPaige)
Tan Renga Prompt #30:
daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven
[ … ] your stanza ??????
I do enjoy the cardinals when they sing!
Cheers, Jules
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Excellent!
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