Daffodils Open – Tan Renga

 Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #30:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven

[ … ] your stanza ??????

~~~~~
daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven
dappled faces beam with joy
cardinals flutter in song

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Other entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014

LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month Jan 2014
(by Haiku writer – JulesPaige)

Tan Renga Prompt #30:
daffodils open
after two days of spring rain
yellow from heaven

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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2 Responses to Daffodils Open – Tan Renga

  1. julespaige says:

    I do enjoy the cardinals when they sing!

    Cheers, Jules

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