Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge # 34: write a Tan Renga.
Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7). Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two. Poet One writes the 5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.
winter meadows
blossoming frost works
on window panes
[ … ] your stanza ??????
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winter meadows
blossoming frost works
on window panes
inner sanctuary calls
fire crackles, blossoms droop
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Prompt # 34:
winter meadows
blossoming frost works
on window panes
[ … ] your stanza ??????
I really like the fire crackling.. then those blooms are all the more beautiful
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Ah, many a time just me by the fireplace….
Nice 😉
Thanks for stopping by ~J
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