Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #40: write a Tan Renga.
Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7). Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two. Poet One writes the 5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.
clinging to the bank
where water wrestles with rock –
one yellow leaf
[ … ] your stanza ??????
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clinging to the bank
where water wrestles with rock –
one yellow leaf
autumn’s transition evolves
masterpiece of leaves one by one
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014
(by Haiku writer – Jen of Blog It or Lose It)
Prompt # 40:
clinging to the bank
where water wrestles with rock –
one yellow leaf
[ … ] your stanza ??????
This is lovely Becca! I love the image of autumn being a masterpiece, and each leaf being an additional stroke or an additional line of music — this is a great tan renga! 🙂
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So glad you like it 😀
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Very much!
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