Glittering Blue – Tan Renga

 

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge #50:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

glittering blue
above empty riverbed
wings of dragonfly

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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glittering blue
above empty riverbed
wings of dragonfly
iridescent raindrops fall
creating prisms in sunlight

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Other entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month May 2014
(by Haiku writer – Ese)

Prompt #50:
glittering blue
above empty riverbed
wings of dragonfly

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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8 Responses to Glittering Blue – Tan Renga

  1. Wow Becca what a wonderful continuation, makes the “painting” brighter and more beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. jhanagan2014 says:

    glittering blue
    above empty river bed
    wings of dragonfly
    fluttering gossamer veils
    drift leaves of autumn crimson

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  3. lovely complement Becca

    Like

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