Pine Trees

“Time Glass” – “I will challenge you again to write a haiku within 12 hours.  A haiku which is inspired on a photo and a prompt.  Today this prompt is Pine Tree.”


Forest cathedral
Disguises forsaken trail
Fallen needles drift


© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014


Pine Tree

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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5 Responses to Pine Trees

  1. Nicely written …. that last line is really great it brought a haiku by Basho in mind:

    clear cascades
    into the waves scatter
    blue pine needles

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  2. Cheryl-Lynn says:

    Lovely especially love that last line, I agree with Björn, it is like the softest carpet and the scent…wow!


  3. The disguised and hidden trails are the ones I want most to ferret out and follow!


  4. lynn__ says:

    Oh, I like the idea of a forest cathedral…yes!


  5. Those fallen needles are like the softest carpet sometimes..


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