Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge # 56: write a Tan Renga.
Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7). Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two. Poet One writes the 5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.
Original Poet: jazzytower of thoughts and entanglements
winding through past life
foreign tongues absorbed in dreams
sense of home prevails
[ … ] your stanza ??????
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winding through past life
foreign tongues absorbed in dreams
sense of home prevails
seven sisters harmonize
‘neath archangels widespread wings
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Other entries for Tan Renga Challenge
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014
(by Haiku writer – jazzytower)
Prompt # 56:
winding through past life
foreign tongues absorbed in dreams
sense of home prevails
[ … ] your stanza ??????
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
Great completion Becca …
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After reading Delores comment I looked up “seven sisters”. What a lovely ending. This was my first time hearing about the sisters. I think you just pressed my star gazing button:)-
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Nice!
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Nicely done! I use to love finding the seven sisters as a child.
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