“Home” – Tan Renga

 

Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge # 56:    write a Tan Renga.

Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7).  Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two.  Poet One writes the  5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.

Original Poet:   jazzytower of thoughts and entanglements

winding through past life
foreign tongues absorbed in dreams
sense of home prevails

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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winding through past life
foreign tongues absorbed in dreams
sense of home prevails
seven sisters harmonize
‘neath archangels widespread wings

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Other entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Sept 2014
(by Haiku writer – jazzytower)

Prompt # 56:
winding through past life
foreign tongues absorbed in dreams
sense of home prevails

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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4 Responses to “Home” – Tan Renga

  1. Great completion Becca …

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  2. jazzytower says:

    After reading Delores comment I looked up “seven sisters”. What a lovely ending. This was my first time hearing about the sisters. I think you just pressed my star gazing button:)-

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  3. Nicely done! I use to love finding the seven sisters as a child.

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