Written for the Carpe Diem Challenge # 57: write a Tan Renga.
Tan Renga is a two stanza poem with 5-7-5 and 7-7 syllables (5-7-5-7-7). Unlike a Tanka written by one poet, Tan Renga is written by two. Poet One writes the 5-7-5 and Poet Two completes 7-7.
Original Poet: Georgia of Bastet and Sekhmet’s Library
early morning
silence before the rising sun
raindrops on a branch
[ … ] your stanza ??????
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early morning
silence before the rising sun
raindrops on a branch
dewy prisms glint in first light
gently sprinkling ladybugs
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Other entries for Tan Renga Challenge
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014
(by Haiku writer – Georgia)
Prompt # 57:
early morning
silence before the rising sun
raindrops on a branch
[ … ] your stanza ??????
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
“dewy prisms glint in first light” … this is really wonderful line Becca and the concluding line about the lady-bugs makes this Tan Renga really a beauty, a masterpiece.
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love the ladybug presence.
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ladybugs adorn themselves
sprinkled with the morning dew
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Moist and lovely morning snapshot…your completion of this tan renga is seamless.
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Very lovely!
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this is beautiful, ladybugs’ colours accentuating even more with those splashes too:)
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