.:: Lie in Wait ::.

Posted on September 15, 2011 by becca givens






with hushed patience
dream snatchers lie in wait for
your relinquishment

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My reaction:  Don’t ever give up!!!

Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011


The Height of Haiku Challenge
Day 15 Prompt:
Patience

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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25 Responses to .:: Lie in Wait ::.

  1. Silver Bird Photography says:
    September 29, 2011 at 6:41 pm

    This is really good. They must be stopped!
    Hi Becca, thanks for liking my haiku post. Glad you stopped by.
    I’ve been extremely busy this past month and doing all I can to keep up my commitments here.
    Have a great weekend, early.

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  2. unsungpoet says:
    September 19, 2011 at 5:46 pm

    How very encouraging and heartwarming too! Thank you for this…

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  3. Inside the Mind of Isadora says:
    September 18, 2011 at 11:10 pm

    I just love this. I can’t say more because I love it says it all.
    Great …
    Isadora

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  4. Pat Cegan says:
    September 17, 2011 at 4:27 pm

    LOVELOVELOVE this! I will add it to my slogan: “Don’t let anyone steal your joy!” Did I tell you that I also LOVELOVELOVE you! hugs, pat

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  5. Traci B says:
    September 17, 2011 at 12:30 pm

    Excellent pairing of words and image, Becca. Well done with both. 🙂

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  6. dani says:
    September 17, 2011 at 2:57 am

    stunning artwork, Becca! ♥ and a true and powerful haiku. love them both! ♥

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  8. Andy Sewina says:
    September 16, 2011 at 4:58 pm

    I love the ‘dream snatcher’ image.

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  9. Sue Dreamwalker says:
    September 16, 2011 at 2:07 pm

    Hi Becca… well I hope not to snatch any dreams.. 🙂 but I may walk in my sleep…
    Just catching up as Ive been away a few days.. Hope you have a great Weekend..
    Dreamwalker xox

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  10. Tilly Bud says:
    September 16, 2011 at 3:52 am

    Excellent! We should always be on the lookout for dreamsnatchers.

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  11. Rekha says:
    September 15, 2011 at 11:40 pm

    So beautiful…dream snatchers have a way of creeping around in the middle of the night.

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  12. Susie Clevenger says:
    September 15, 2011 at 9:15 pm

    Great job…I have had a run in with dream snatchers..not pretty

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  13. dsnake1 says:
    September 15, 2011 at 6:48 pm

    great visuals, Becca. 🙂

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  14. magicalmysticalteacher says:
    September 15, 2011 at 6:07 pm

    Oh, yes, dream snatchers can be very patient! Darn them anyway!

    Patience of the Ant

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  15. Gemma Wiseman says:
    September 15, 2011 at 2:56 pm

    “Hushed patience” sets a beautiful atmosphere for this glorious haiku!

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  16. Cassiopeia Rises says:
    September 15, 2011 at 12:06 pm

    Makes one afraid to go to sleep. Loved this Becca.

    Melanie

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  17. Nanka says:
    September 15, 2011 at 10:52 am

    Sadness in those words!! Loved your reaction!! Cheers becca!!

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  19. Mike says:
    September 15, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Becca this was wonderful.
    The vision of dream snatchers waiting quietly and patiently made me shiver.
    A great read. Thanks.

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