I’m too late for linking but I was intrigued by the d’Verse Poets prompt on an “American Sentence” a poem in 17 syllables. American haiku were invented by Allen Ginsberg, an American poet and one of the leading figures of the Beat Generation in the 1950s. The challenge is to use two images and put them in juxtaposition in order to create a sort of tension. To me, this is similar to a mindful moment or small stone.
Last days dwindling ~ tethered to oxygen ~ planting daylilies for spring
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013
Great symbol of death/rebirth, Becca. A lot in those 17 syllables!
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Thank you, Victoria!
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hope is a miraculous thing… !
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Something to look forward to in spring, how nice! Nicely becca!
Hank
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So lovely – and the oxygen image does well as a sort of “hinge” for the poem. Blessings to you and your family, especially your mom.
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may those day lilies brighten your days come spring…but bring us a bit of oxygen as well…smiles. you should link it in at OLN….
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The daylilies will remind us of my mom once she is gone!
Thank you for the visit, Brian … sorry I was too late to include with Mr. Linky!
(In my denser moments — what is OLN?)
Ah hah moment — Open Link Night!! Will do!
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smiles. glad you did….hope you are having a great week
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