Kindness wrought
Strangers unaware
Giving joy
Giving joy
Giver to taker
Ripple blooms
Ripple blooms
Inner joy shimmers
Kindness wrought
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This is written in 3-5-3 Haiku form.
Image Credit
© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
i really love this, Becca! your poetry and the passing on of random kindness… and how the “ripple blooms” beautiful! ♥
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so sweet becca.. Loved the way you wrote especially 3-5-3 form. WoW..!
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Nice–especially like the wrap around full-circle effect 🙂
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AWE….so sweet
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I came here upon Linda’s (Shoreacres) recommendation. You’ve stirred up the ripple effects of spreading joy and delight with your poetry. Thanks so much for this wonderful haiku, Becca!
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I am delighted you and shoreacres stopped for a visit.
Blessings to both of you ~~
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This is just lovely. I’m going to share it with a friend whose blog is “Ripple Effects”. I know she’ll enjoy it.
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So much said in so few words! I’ve not tried this format yet. I think in tomorrow’s prompt, I will have to do it!
Becca, thank you so much for your motivation and kind comments in my blog. Love and appreciate them very much.
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Interesting form and you do it well. hugs, pat
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Yeah, the 3 5 3 form works so well for you here!
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The beauty of ripple blooms….love how you went to 3-5-3 form…so much said in such few words
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Lovely. The kindness behind the gift more important the the thing given.
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Beautiful and so accurate–kindness given unstintingly does ripple across the water and air of our lives to reach the shores of so many other hearts! Beautifully perfect photo to go with your poem.
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Very nice pattern and set…I like the ripple blooms ….
If I may tweak your last verse for a perfect 3-5-3 form:
Ripple blooms
Inner joy glimmers (or shimmers)
Kindness wrought
Thanks for your lovely words in my blog ~ You are very kind ~
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oops … I moved the line — and didn’t catch the necessary change — Grace, you are so astute!! You must dream 5-7-5 and 3-5-3 in your sleep — thank you for catching my slip (of mind)!! 😀 I appreciate your feedback and the manner in which you present it!
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Lovely, it flows well and carries a charming message.
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“kindness wrought” I like that very much. Lovely Haiku
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Beautifully expressed Becca…Loved it!!
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Beautiful words and good advice too! 🙂
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The photo is adorable and so is your haiku set. Becca, I so look forward to what you write! 😀 Thank you for the treat!
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How pretty!
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Dellightful! I love this 3-5-3 form, it’s especially clever!
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