Unconstrained Joy






Quenching nature’s thirst
Fury laced still refreshing
Skies’ unconstrained joy

 

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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012


September Heights
Day 12

Prompt:
Rain
(#171 )






Tackle It Tuesday
Prompt: Kigo

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Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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17 Responses to Unconstrained Joy

  1. That’s quite a relief for thirst to be quenched. Wonderful lines – all three.

  2. Bodhirose says:

    I like the freedom that the sky feels to let go in joy…beautiful, Becca.

  3. granbee says:

    How wonderful to be in raincoat and shielded by umbrella while releasing butterflies and blossoms and love for all!

  4. Leo says:

    I like that the rain is unconstrained :) Beautiful.

  5. Patti says:

    I like this a lot. The idea of the skies unrestrained joy is wonderful. Great picture too.

  6. shakira says:

    I love the strong and powerful contrast. I love it!
    Mine is here
    Have you a FANTABULOUS WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

  7. elleceef says:

    “Quenching nature ‘s thirst” I like that. Refreshing haiku.

  8. Locomente says:

    The words are tooo good!!!

  9. The unconstrained joy could also turn to unconstrained fury!

    Seven Rains

  10. odyzz says:

    I liked “unconstrained joy”..lovely!!

  11. Jolly says:

    Beautiful! The unconstrained joy is quite contagious.

  12. You say so much in just three lines, 17 syllables!

  13. Green Speck says:

    You have used kigo quite well here :-)

  14. Good one … love the way you’ve used the kigo rain in this one. Thank you for participating in Tackle It Tuesday.

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