State of confusion
Fearful indecisive self
Puppet on a string
Release these shackles
Freely escape to search and soar
Stage of clarity
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
POETRY POTLUCK Prompt:
Doubts, Fear, Inhibitions and Hesitations
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
so wonderful Becca! Untangle! 🙂
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thank you so much!!!
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Very nice, I like it.
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thank you for visiting and leaving a comment! 🙂
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I need a bit of that clarity… I really enjoyed it!
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I am always searching to improve my clarity as well … some days are better than others! Thank you for visiting, seabell!
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Amazing becca.. Loved it..
Someone is Special
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What a nice surprise, SiS! Thank you for visiting. 🙂
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very beautifully said becca. thats better because i thought i have commented on this post earlier. i rarely forget the poems i have read before.
esp a beautiful poem like yours.
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trisha — good of you to always visit and leave a generous compliment and encouragement. 🙂
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Amazing lines and a deep thought behind them !!
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thank you, nimue … it is a beacon of encouragement for those seeking, and is meant to provide an awakening ah-hah moment for those who need! it is always a pleasure when you visit!
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just terrific! we sure can remove most of the strings if we try sincerely.
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take a leap of faith … we will develop the wings!
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freedom is priceless at times.
love your take, smiles.
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yes it is … and thank you for visiting.
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This is excellent! The first could stand alone, but I really like the freeing of the second.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a kind comment on mine. 🙂
Gloria
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Gloria – it started out as only the first … but couldn’t leave it in despair! Thank you for the return visit. Appreciate it ~
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My pleasure, honestly. I enjoy reading your work. 🙂
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loved the last it is very powerful!
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a goal for each of us …
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Lovely pair of verses!
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thank you ~
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It’s a wonderful piece of work and very insightful message.
Thanks for visiting me. I highly appreciate your comments. 🙂
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Thank you for the return visit. I look forward to more visits to your blog.
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Interesting, Rebecca, much to think about. I see that you will probably have 5,000 hits by tomorrow. Congratulations! Your blog is a treasure house! hugs, pat
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More to ponder … the amazement in growth … personally and blog-wise. Thank you! xoxoxo
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I like the juxtaposition of these two verses. The first trapped, balancing on the edge. the second free.
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It started as a sole Haiku … but I couldn’t leave it in such a sad moment … thus the creation of the second for hope! Thank you for visiting ~becca
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This one is really nice ~becca, Clarity…vivid.
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thank you for visiting, John … it is always uplifting! becca
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I love being with my family and I really enjoy reading your blog very much. Thanks for sharing this excellent job. Feel free to stop by our Easy Lifestyle website anytime.
A March Madness Poem
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Thank you for visiting … hope you drop by again … love your site as well!
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