Earth’s first parents’ sin
Seductress and an apple
Doomed generations
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This is my entry for:
Gooseberry Gardens Poetry Picnic Week 1: Adam and Eve.
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
"On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea" 
hi becca! came back from sabbatical.. how are you? wow! i like this post.. glad you are keeping it up! and glad to be of acquaintance back thru gooseberry!
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great use of image
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And it seems we continue to doom ourselves! I love the image.
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love this! you really expressed the full impact in so few syllables!!! and a super image! ♥
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simply and powerful,
beautiful inspirations.
🙂
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So unexpected– gave me a chuckle. & love the illustration!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2011/08/17/week-149-too-much-sadness-fills-a-room-displacing/
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Writing a haiku for this week’s theme — very nice! 🙂 You’ve told a story in so a few words, which leaves room for a lot of interpretations (which is a good thing). Well done, Becca! 🙂
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this poem has so much depth cos even those few lines lay alot of discussion…well done poet..
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hmmm she the serpent, the seductress, she the mother, cool twist!!! 🙂
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/fragment-of-yesteryear/
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Thanks, lynnaima!! Happy you stopped and left a message! 😀
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Oh, this is a good one! Excellent of the prompt and perfect picture to go with it. I continue to just look at prompts and go blank. You do them so well, BB. hugs, pat
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I only write what I am directed to do … you are the queen of longer and more variety of getting messages out to the world!! We can balance each other ~~ xoxox
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So perfectly and succinctly said. And the picture? A little intimidating even!
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I found the picture after writing … and it gave it a definite twist!! Thank you ~~
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Oooh, Becca! I really liked this one too!! Loved the picture that you put with it. Great, excellent, superb, have I overdone it yet, lol. Just kidding ’cause they all do apply. Peace 🙂
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You are too kind …. thank you … I appreciate the support! 🙂 Happy you stopped for a visit!
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compact and powerful.
your work is a beauty.
🙂
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I appreciate your generous feedback … thank you!
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apt …
well done.
😉
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Thank you ~~
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This is awesome … the image is perfect … the words are on target … saying it all.
Very, very nice, Becca.
Hugs,
Izzy
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Thanks, Izzy ~~ always delighted with your visits. Have a great week! xoxo 😀
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You hit that nail on the head. Nice one!
Here is my offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/
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Thank you!! 🙂
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Seduction is so playful… Why dooming Eve and generations that followed just because of it?
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Seabell – I am not real sure of the answer there …. but I gather with all the beauty and bounty that was offered … why wasn’t that enough? There was only one tiny request … In this instance … No really meant NO!!!
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Boy doomed is right, Becca! 😦 Awesome Haiku!
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Ever wonder what life would be like – IF Eve and Adam had not been so curious? Hmmmm!
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I do love that picture and the poem…really well done. Haven’t put a poem up yet will have to think of one…just really liked this!
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It just popped in and I wrote it down before it could leave! 😀 Glad you like it!!
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