Suspicion Erupts

Lipstick on collar
Insulting perfume lingers
Suspicion erupts

* Alluding to the prompt: doubt!

Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012

The April Heights

 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 Form

Day 4
Prompt 116

Celebrating April as Poetry Month!


About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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17 Responses to Suspicion Erupts

  1. Raivenne says:

    So much packed in so little. The heat of Vesuvius would be a summer breeze in comparison.


  2. Mike says:

    A wonderful haiku and picture.
    There is no doubt that he’s in real trouble.


  3. Asni says:

    Oh oh! Looks like the lipstick was intentionally planted there. 😉


  4. Eric Alagan says:

    Mum, be careful when you kiss me next time…


  5. leahJlynn says:

    Thank you for coming by, I will be practicing some haiku. When I Have I’ll post it with your link attached.. Thanks again, for your encouragement. and O-o to someone in your haiku..


  6. Suspicious absolutely.



  7. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Too bad you couldn’t work “incriminating perfume” into the syllable count! 🙂

    Cactus Did Not Doubt


  8. booguloo says:

    Time to reframe his brain.


  9. Love the description “insulting perfume”. Powerful last line!


  10. wayne says:

    oops for sure…..nicely done


  11. Cynosure says:

    Have this type of suspicion ever occurred to you…??? lolzzz…:P
    nice Haiku… 😀 😀 😀
    kudos to you for a completely different take on the prompt…loved it… 😀


  12. Valli says:

    So apt lines for the picture!…Loved your take


  13. The pic is just nailing the words to perfection!
    Liked it! 🙂


  14. OOOpppsss … someone made a BIG mistake. I like your take on the photo.
    Very nice, Becca …!!!


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