Fruitless Blossoms


Fruitless Blossoms

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Logo - Carpe Diem - December 2012

Prompt:
Buson – Fruitless Blossoms

Based on:
fruitless blossoms
are beaten by the rain
in the melon fields

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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13 Responses to Fruitless Blossoms

  1. Lolly says:

    Here’s to sunnier days, becca, but you made the depressing, lovely. Well done!

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  2. brudberg says:

    Perfectly balanced with the picture. Very good.

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  3. Green Speck says:

    A perfect interpretation of the prompt !!!

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  4. Yesterday the weather in Delhi was somewhat like what you have described… and I kinda liked it, though my sister was all sad throughout the day.

    http://unshakenthoughts.wordpress.com/2012/12/12/fruitless-blossom-haiku/

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  5. Beautiful and well balanced haiga Becca. Wonderful photo …

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  6. shoreacres says:

    Wonderful haiku – “ruse” is the perfect, slightly ambiguous word. But look again, there on the left of the photo. There are two tiny patches of blue. 😉

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  7. Battered minds play strange tricks on us, as you say…

    Beaten by the Rain

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  8. there is such an overpowering imagery in such few words! well done as usual!

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  9. yerpirate says:

    Powerful haiku there – and so well presented with the storm clouds.

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