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Prompt:
Buson – Fruitless Blossoms
Based on:
fruitless blossoms
are beaten by the rain
in the melon fields
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WoW !
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Here’s to sunnier days, becca, but you made the depressing, lovely. Well done!
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Perfectly balanced with the picture. Very good.
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A perfect interpretation of the prompt !!!
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Yesterday the weather in Delhi was somewhat like what you have described… and I kinda liked it, though my sister was all sad throughout the day.
http://unshakenthoughts.wordpress.com/2012/12/12/fruitless-blossom-haiku/
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Beautiful and well balanced haiga Becca. Wonderful photo …
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Wonderful haiku – “ruse” is the perfect, slightly ambiguous word. But look again, there on the left of the photo. There are two tiny patches of blue. 😉
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You are right — even in the darkest, there is some blue near … may have to search but it’s there.
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Battered minds play strange tricks on us, as you say…
Beaten by the Rain
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there is such an overpowering imagery in such few words! well done as usual!
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Ahhh, thank you!! 😀
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Powerful haiku there – and so well presented with the storm clouds.
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Thanks, pirate!! I appreciate the visit.
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