Wallflower’s First

Posted on February 24, 2014 by becca givens


Wallflowers first

Wallflower’s first dance
She pirouettes until dawn
Ballet slippers fly



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Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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12 Responses to Wallflower’s First

  1. cheryl says:
    February 27, 2014 at 12:17 pm

    Luved this Becca, it’s full of youth and emotion

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  2. milan rajkumar says:
    February 26, 2014 at 1:39 pm

    reminds me of Cinderella somehow …! vividly painted !

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  3. Brenda says:
    February 25, 2014 at 7:03 pm

    My heart leaps with those ballet slippers. Truly magical.

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  4. WabiSabi says:
    February 25, 2014 at 6:10 pm

    Memories of my ‘first’ dance came back to me! Thank you!

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  5. reshmaharish says:
    February 25, 2014 at 2:37 pm

    Your words created images of a fairytale..It is liberating to let go of one’s inhibitions.

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  6. Kalpana Solsi says:
    February 25, 2014 at 1:49 pm

    Expressed well in few words.

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  7. Rallentanda says:
    February 25, 2014 at 9:22 am

    Wallflowers have their turn. Good one.!

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  10. Alice Keys says:
    February 25, 2014 at 3:56 am

    I liked the way you brought the wallflower’s dance to life with only a few words. Cleanly written. 🙂

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  11. oneofaclass says:
    February 25, 2014 at 3:04 am

    Here’s a lovely story told in few syllables! Thanks for sharing and finding Haiku Horizons!

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