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Written in the form of Tilus which is divided into two parts.
The first part:
two lines following a 6-3 syllable count
The second part:
a one-syllable word to complete the subject layered in the first part.
Total syllable count
only 10 syllables
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014
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You know, the word “shimmers” is really tricky. Close to cheesy for its overuse. But you actually pulled it off. =)
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Thank you for that — I did not realize shimmers is overused. I rarely hear or see the word. Appreciate the feedback. 🙂
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You did well. =)
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😀
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Gorgeous! The background and lettering are perfect — they really do seem to shimmer.
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Nice one, new form for me, I might try it sometime…
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Says it all. Great job!
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Very nice! I had not heard of this form. I will have to try it! Thanks 🙂
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Thank you. The form was created by Kelvin SM
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