Morning Shimmers


Morning Shimmers

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Written in the form of Tilus which is divided into two parts.

The first part:
two lines following a 6-3 syllable count

The second part:
a one-syllable word to complete the subject layered in the first part.

Total syllable count
only 10 syllables


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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014

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About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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9 Responses to Morning Shimmers

  1. You know, the word “shimmers” is really tricky. Close to cheesy for its overuse. But you actually pulled it off. =)

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  2. Meg Evans says:

    Gorgeous! The background and lettering are perfect — they really do seem to shimmer.

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  3. suej says:

    Nice one, new form for me, I might try it sometime…

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  4. Says it all. Great job!

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  5. Leonas Lines says:

    Very nice! I had not heard of this form. I will have to try it! Thanks 🙂

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