Morning Shimmers

Morning Shimmers


Written in the form of Tilus which is divided into two parts.

The first part:
two lines following a 6-3 syllable count

The second part:
a one-syllable word to complete the subject layered in the first part.

Total syllable count
only 10 syllables


© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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9 Responses to Morning Shimmers

  1. You know, the word “shimmers” is really tricky. Close to cheesy for its overuse. But you actually pulled it off. =)


  2. Meg Evans says:

    Gorgeous! The background and lettering are perfect — they really do seem to shimmer.


  3. suej says:

    Nice one, new form for me, I might try it sometime…


  4. Emilio Pasquale says:

    Says it all. Great job!


  5. Leonas Lines says:

    Very nice! I had not heard of this form. I will have to try it! Thanks 🙂


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