On raven’s wing
O’er sea of tranquility
Flight of her spirit
∴∴∴
A departed soul
Ascends with flaming sunrise
Dewdrops dry swiftly
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© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2014
Prompt:
“A Departed Soul”
Also sharing with
Poets United Midweek Motif ~
Halloween,
or Celebrating the Dead
Beautiful …
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Beautiful haiku! x
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Thank you!
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Just visited Poe’s home where the raven pecks away at the upstairs window even when there is no breeze. Very nice ascension…
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Thank you! 😀
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Oh, so beautiful! Coincidentally, dragonfly is the symbol my late husband and I chose before his departure, as a signal for when he would be near in spirit. He has used it a number of times!
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Oh, I am saying coincidentally – but of course that is your blog title, not a title for these particular haiku. Still, it certainly touched a chord for me in relation to this topic.
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I understood what you meant 😉 — dragonfly is a wonderful sign to know your husband’s near!
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Raven departure and flaming ascension. What a way to go! Strong nature-filled images.
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Thank you!
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Simply lovely.
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Becca this is so very touching, such a beautiful poem.
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Thank you for that! 😀
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