Elusive I am …
Large expanse I fly …
Precious nest I hide
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© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011
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Week Two (2) of THE EYELET REVIEW visual prompt
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Included in featured posts on Thursday Rally – Poetry Collection Week 41
senryu is such a fabulous form for saying a lot in few words. Yours is no exception.
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Vivian – it is so nice of you to visit. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a kind remark!
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So much said in so few words, very nice!
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a hidden nest is very much needed a lot of times, Becca! a haiku expressive of more than just the three lines! beautiful!
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
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Thank you, Vinay for visiting. It is always an honor! 🙂
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We all need one precious nest to hide from time to time. I’m glad you have yours, lovely words!
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Blaga – glad you stopped by for a visit!
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beautiful description and i like that you wrote it as if being told by the bird, Becca. lovely haiku!!! ♥
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Thank you xoxoxo
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Since this deals with nature…I would say that “Elusiveness” is a trade in surviving.
Loved the haiku…
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I think it is “etched” in their survival!
Thank you for visiting.
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It’s so nice when we start to discover multiple rich meanings in just three lines of words…
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seashell – thank you for stopping for a visit. Have an awesome week ahead!
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And I would like to add, I am thankful to stumble upon someone like you… 🙂
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precious nest it must be.. here is my rally poem… a dream she is… a kiss seals…
Someone is Special
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what a lovely haiku!
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/remembrance.html
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Thank you, Bing!
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Short, sweet yet it conveys so much. Just shows its quality not quantity…
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I love first time visitors – thank you for stopping by!
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i like this, it’s interesting how much you can capture in so little words. Like the picture too!
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Emily Jane – thank you! 🙂
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Cute haiku! Nature is something we should cherish 🙂
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Thank you for stopping by for a visit. Nature is an ongoing balm for the senses. Mother Earth calls for us to connect with nature daily for a sense of grounding and renewal. Many lessons we could learn from nature.
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you make it live and fun,
superb word crafting…
Happy Rally.
🙂
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thanks, jingle!
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Beautifully done! Birds always an honor to have in our midst.
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Yes, they are majestic and spiritual energy beings … thank you for visiting.
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Wonderful, Becca. You work so well with prompts. They often elude me. This photo with your poem are perfect together! hugs, pat
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The Boss has you in your element of variety of genres and wealth of information … He wants me to work on “discipline of brevity”! 🙂
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Just love your photos and poetry together, beautiful ~ becca!!
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Thank you, John. I respect your input ~
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Beautiful and enchanting!!!
Very well composed- hugs xox
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Thank you; I appreciate your visits and support! 🙂
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I love this; something about it invokes the element of surprise. Thank you for participating again!
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I like the results of my prompt better with fresh eyes, than I did initially … thank you for providing and hosting the weekly challenge!
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cute and lovely becca. an amazing snapshot of this fantastic bird- they really fly some distance!!!
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