Vivid colors jump
From rich palette to paper
Shimmying paints’ course
Artist’s eye peruses stage
Shimmying paints’ course
From rich palette to paper
Vivid colors jump
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This is written in Nisaiku form … 5-7-5 (Title – 7) 5-7-5
© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
the colours fly like a butterfly to paint a beautiful image.. loved it..
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Vivid colors DO seem to jump onto the canvas, don’t they? Wonderful way you expressed that fact here today!
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Lovely, Becca! really beautifully done! ♥
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Very clever, Becca. I have to still the urge to send it to a past partner. He is a glass artist and really dislikes any symmetry in his work. This, words and painting, would dissolve him! 😀
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I like the vivid colours jumping
(from palette to paper, though is only 6 syllables; you might want to add like white paper :-))
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oh the drawbacks of syllable tools — each of them denote 7 syllables … however, if I use my fingers — I get 6 … so I will add a word to make it officially 7 … thanks for the head’s up. 🙂
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Ooooh I love this! 🙂
So nicely done! 🙂 ❤
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Yeah cool!
Love that word shimmying!
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Pic and poem perfect. How did you make the middle line blue? I couldn’t work out how to do that on WP.
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This is great!! Love the photo and your words….both so vivid
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excellent post! and it fits perfectly the theme of the challenge!
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Wow…can relate to it..I love painting…..Read two posts about myself today 😛
Lucky me…Lovely words!
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