Gone is youthful glow
No longer slim, quick, auburn
Wrinkles evident
Time washes over
Etched experience throughout
Transforming beauty
Dedicated years
Love continues to blossom
Bond stronger with time
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Image Credit
© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
absolutely beautiful, Becca!!! ♥♥♥
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love continue to blossom.. beautiful dedication.. thanks..
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As you already know, I love this poem, Becca. Your observations on the power of enduring love are delightful and inspiring. And the economic form you use so well adds strength in it’s simplicity. Thank you!
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Lovely, bond stronger with time – speaks of eternity, to me. Nicely!
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Such a beautiful dedication, Becca! This is what true love is all about!
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What almost all of us hope to find, beautifully described, Becca
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Such a lovely and meaningful post….I like it ~
If I may suggest just a tweak – transforming beauty – will make it 5 syllables ~
Great to see you shining in this form ~
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I guess I was counting 3 syllables for beauty – rather than 2 … thank you for the suggested tweak!! I will change transformed to transforming ~~ 🙂
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Perfection! Way to live, Becca!
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These wonderful verses celebrating mature love really do a great job of showing how beauty glows from within from a loving heart.
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This is absolutely beautiful, Becca! It almost makes me cry. Awesome!
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Beautiful words here Becca.. and Age is only skin deep.. Love looks not at the skin but at the heart! xx Hugs
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Gorgeous lines. I am in love with the third one. Hugs, Becca!
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Awesome awesome awesome words!…Beautiful dedication!
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Beautiful words…dedicated to love. I have been married 41 years and love is still evolving for us. He is my best friend.
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Beautiful words. I’m nodding my head in appreciation.
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Beautiful set of haiku!:)
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True love does not age. Awesome.
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This is so … wonderful. I see my parents in this one. They are still in deep love and very dedicated to each other.
Thank you for sharing this set of haiku.
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Good verse.
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Becca, this is really nice. I know a couple like this. He is in a nursing home now – she is standing by. Thank you for describing their dedication so well. Special Haiku
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I saw my parents’ bond grow stronger with time. They were truly dedicated to one another. When my mother died, it just about killed my dad, but he hung on for another five years…
Dedicated to Romancing the Wild
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What a lovely dedication..indeed it beomes stronger..no doubt about that.. beautiful..BG..
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