Windows to my Soul

Posted on August 30, 2012 by becca givens






Windows to my soul
Depth beyond fourth dimension
Contentment awaits

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© by rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012


Eyes

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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10 Responses to Windows to my Soul

  1. granbee says:
    September 5, 2012 at 1:06 pm

    Conceiving of contentment as the fourth dimension is really brilliant, becca!

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  2. David King says:
    September 1, 2012 at 2:30 am

    I sincerely hope so. Enjoyed the verse.

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  3. poetrydiary says:
    September 1, 2012 at 1:32 am

    I’m glad about the contentment at the end.

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  5. Grace says:
    August 31, 2012 at 6:20 pm

    I like the eyes of contentment ~

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  6. Ritva says:
    August 31, 2012 at 2:18 pm

    Lovely and so full of meaning. 🙂

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  7. mrsupole says:
    August 31, 2012 at 10:29 am

    Love the Haiku, the eyes have it. That is a beautiful eye, I love the color of the eye. Not sure why Brian is afraid of the last line. Contentment sounds great to me.

    Very nice addition to this weeks Eyes Theme Thursday. Very pretty.

    God bless.

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  8. Mary says:
    August 31, 2012 at 8:31 am

    Beautifully concise!

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  10. brian miller says:
    August 30, 2012 at 8:10 pm

    ouch on that last line….

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