Dream Stealers



Refuse relinquishing your dreams
dream stealers are near
patiently waiting for you
to give up today

If you don’t succeed
in your quest today
stand tall with resolve
to try again tomorrow

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Image Credit

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011

 

Prompt:
Free Verse

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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34 Responses to Dream Stealers

  1. Jamie Dedes says:

    Amen! There is always something or someone waiting to crush us. Nice poem with value added of inspiration. Thanks!

    Happy Potluck, Becca! Poem on …

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  2. Great advice 🙂

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  3. Shashi says:

    Dear Becca

    Perfect post and perfect advise…
    Liked it very much…

    Thanks for joining in the poetry potluck this week, which I hosted for the first time this week….

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  4. Leo says:

    Oh yes, they are, and indeed a lot of them present. But I wont give up my dream 🙂 Thank you, Becca.

    A Poetic World – My Potluck Post

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  5. Sam says:

    A beautiful ray of hope Becca… 🙂

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  6. booguloo says:

    Like this one and the pic!

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  7. Trisha says:

    sometimes they truely intimidate us but we should never give in.

    lots of love.

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    • becca givens says:

      It goes along with the saying “misery loves company!” … we must keep focused and concentrate on our strengths and passions so we do not allow them to cross the lines into destroying our dreams.

      xoxo

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  8. Jingle says:

    positive and beautiful.
    smiles.

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  9. Old Raven says:

    Becca … you so often bring to others hope through your writings, that is a lovely thing!

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  10. Hema says:

    Thats true. Never let go of your dreams. Well written.

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  11. Ravenblack says:

    Dream stealers and dream killers are ever about. Good encouragement in the second stanza. 🙂

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  12. your dream poem is smart and impressive. smiles.

    Good Evening:

    How divine when you come to poetry potluck,

    Week 43 is free verse week, submit 1 to 3 random poems, enjoy the fun!

    Hope to see you tonight.

    xoxox

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  13. Lola says:

    Thank you so much for sharing this with us. And thank you for your recent visit to my site. I think the key is to recognize the dream stealers. Sometimes they are quite stealthy and cunning.

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  14. Marilyn says:

    I love this one. It is so true. I avoid dream poppers like the plague! Thanks for your wisdom!

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    • becca givens says:

      Those dream stealers love nothing better than to wait and jump at the chance to squash other’s dreams … hopefully, people listen to them less and less. Thanks, Marilyn for your visit and feedback! 🙂

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  15. Renee Espriu says:

    I love your descriptive words to go with this image, Becca. Is this your art or another’s. I did see the Image Credit and clicked on it but it only enlarged the piece. Thank you for suggesting about my art and perhaps at some point I might consider it. Presently I am working on quite a large piece that is taking me some time as it is larger than ones I’ve done before and it might not be a candidate for putting on my site. I have enjoyed coming here and getting ideas. Between you and Trisha I now feel comfortable to write Haikus! Thank You!

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    • becca givens says:

      Awesome news, Renee … I look forward to seeing the addition to your blog.
      RE: artwork … no, this is not one of mine … too detailed for me … mine is more meditative and abstract … I have very few composed pieces. Thank you for visiting. 🙂

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  16. Pat Cegan says:

    Yes, yes! Don’t let anyone steal your dreams or joy!!!! hugs, pat

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  17. siggiofmaine says:

    Enjoyed the positive spirit of this poem…
    and the accompanying photo.
    ☮ ♥ Siggi in Downeast Maine

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