Am I coherent?
My guardians stand silent
Talking in circles

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The April Heights

 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 Form

Day 12
Prompt 124

Celebrating April as Poetry Month!

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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11 Responses to Coherent?

  1. granbee says:

    Ah, yes, the guardians do know best! They encircle us because we NEED this,you know, in our incoherent state!


  2. Cynosure says:

    loved this one…an important question indeed… 🙂


  3. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Are you SURE it’s the guardians who are talking in circles?

    “Six Takes on ‘Coherent’”

    “What Coherent Tales”


  4. Mary says:

    Coherency is all relative, I think. Your poem makes me ponder.


  5. elleceef says:

    Guardians often talk in circles 🙂 Well done.


  6. souldipper says:

    I like the double entendre of this, Becca.


  7. “Talking in circles” great sentence Becca. Love the read. To me coherent was very difficult to make a haiku about.


  8. Ramesh Sood says:

    Did the question get the answer.. nicely written..


  9. tigerbrite says:

    Looks like angel Michael. Hope you catch up with the dialogue 🙂


  10. aah! but i didn’t understand..!


  11. booguloo says:

    I often ask this question myself.


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