Jaded thoughts
Nix positive growth
Jolt of verve
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Note: I love the color jade, and I enjoy the jade pieces I have to wear as well as the symbolism behind this ancient stone. So, although, I realize Bjorn Brudberg and Carpe Diem may have meant for the prompt to be more for the color of jade, or the significance of jade in symbolism, and/or spirituality … I could not help myself. This is what popped up and my muse ran with it!! 😀
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Image Credit
© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2012
Prompt:
Jade
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I am glad you followed your muse, the poem is great and the photo is beautiful x
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Hey becca that was great there… even I used the Jaded version of Jade in my haiku… so all cool I guess..
Ta Tarun
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Wonderful haiku ~ love the ‘jaded’ use of the prompt ~ many ways to write haiku ~ Bravo to you ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^
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Your muse knows where to lead you!
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Jaded thoughts, jolt of verve… EXCELLENT!! I loved it! Lovely image too!!
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Jade and jaded are almost juxtapositions. Nice use of the prompt.
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Ahhh, thank you, kind sir!! Thank you for the prompt choice!! 😀
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Thoughtful words these. I enjoyed ‘verve’ and the image goes so well with your words. Well done.
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when i think of ‘jaded’ individuals, i think of teenagers….they seem so world-weary
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It is unfortunate for many teenagers and other individuals as well … at times, the body can get bogged down with all the negative energy emitted around them and/or towards them. I think, taking a deep breath, and viewing life from a different perspective can give one that jolt of energy to turn things around. It is important for us, no matter how difficult things may become, to take a deep breath, and trust good will come from it all. Have a blessed weekend! 😀
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Well done Becca. The prompts are just an inspiration source and you may use it as you wish. This haiku is really nice composed. Thank you for sharing.
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