October Forest – TRM

Tan Renga Challenge Month (TRM)
at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

Gene presents Distilling Frost’s October:


October forest
With amethyst enchantment
Frost greeting sunlight

[ … ] your stanza ??????

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October forest
With amethyst enchantment
Frost greeting sunlight
Stripping trees form web of bones
While the moon bids all goodnight

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A Tan Renga is a short chained poem and is written by two poets. It looks very similar with the Tanka, the only difference is that Tan Renga is written by two poets and the Tanka by one poet. In this Tan Renga Challenge the goal is to write the second stanza (7-7) of the Tan Renga by associating on the image or the words painted in the haiku.
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My previous entries for Tan Renga Challenge

© rgb for “On Dragonfly Wings with Buttercup Tea”, 2011 – 2013


LOGO - Carpe Diem Tan Renga Month Nov 2013
(by Gene)

Tan Renga Month #25:
October forest
With amethyst enchantment
Frost greeting sunlight
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[ … ] your stanza ??????

About becca givens

Becca is an artist, poet, and animal communicator. She delights in cooking, nurturing, and sharing a rich spiritual life with others on the Path.
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13 Responses to October Forest – TRM

  1. siggiofmaine says:

    Great choice of words/image in your completion…love it.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  2. Sun says:

    the lovely moon puts everyone in sleepy slumber – very nice finish, Becca. ☺

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  3. as I look at my bare trees, I can see webs of finger bones, pointing out that winter is near! well-done..

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  4. ewdupler says:

    I love what you did here. I love the colors on the trees in early October. But they fall to form that web of bones, just in time for Hallows Eve. Very nice contrast!

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  5. web of bones and bidding all goodnight… almost sinister…

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  6. artmusedog says:

    love the moon ‘bidding all goodnight’ ~ delightful completion ~ even the bare trees ~ thanks, carol, xxx

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  7. Great continuation of this Tan Renga started by Gene … really a nice second stanza Becca.

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  8. “web of bones” is such a vivid image! Gives me frissons of fright! 😉

    October Forest

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